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CL Huth's avatar

I think the concept of your book is a good one. However, as I tried to read the sample offered through your link, the book formatting makes it really hard to read.

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Dr. G.V. Loewen's avatar

Hmm, maybe try this then - this is what came up for me from the press:

https://books.friesenpress.com/store/title/119734000532817737

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CL Huth's avatar

That's the link I used.

The paragraphs are huge and in some places one paragraph takes up almost the whole page. It's really hard to read. I don't know if it's just the way Google books is showing it in the preview, but if I click on the book cover, yeah, all big blocks of text.

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Dr. G.V. Loewen's avatar

I’m not sure myself but some of the opening paragraphs are perhaps longer than usual. My problem is the line spacing and text to margin ratio which gives the eye and impression of density, but the press assured me this was standard formatting, and what do I know?

Anyways, thanks for taking a peek. Stay tuned for the Netflix series.

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CL Huth's avatar

Maybe I'll try it again in the future. Or wait until it's streaming. ;-)

Should be about the same time as my paranormal thrillers are in the theater. ;-) (I wish)

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Dr. G.V. Loewen's avatar

Never give up! My own fiction mentor told me it took him over a decade to get noticed at all. Now a three time GG winner here in Canada he has a tolerably big name as a novelist.

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